For next class: Write a follow-up blog post that describes your initial thoughts about revising, reformatting, and re-mediating your literacy narrative for a web audience. Your post should address at least two questions:

  1. How does this image connect to myself as a reader/writer?
  2. What concepts from Gee do you think are most relevant for analyzing your own narrative? What changes or additions could you make to reflect what you’ve learned about Discourses since completing your last draft?

This image of the “conscious management of ones online life” (HCM)  It connects to me as a reader because if I’m going to be expressing my work online for people to see and judge, I want to make it look good. Writing a piece for an online audience, you never know how many people could potentially see your work and who those people are. If I know my work will be witnessed by many people, then I’am more likely to  critique my draft extensively and attempt to write a solid piece of literature.   This connects to Gee because he talks about how you must engage your discourse in a fully fluent manner.  You need this to consciously “look after and preserve an archive of ones digital existence”HCM in order to be successful as a reader or a writer.  If your showing your work online then thats a way of expressing yourself as a writer, especially to people you’ve most likely never met.  A revision I could make to my Literacy Narrative is to get rid of some irrelevant information, and to improve my detail. I Need to elaborate and explain my experience in a more raw matter. With more addition of of material I will need to restructure my paragraph to make it reasonable.

 

 

 

This is the book I read with my aunt Terrie  from my literacy narrative